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Monday, 18 March 2019

what I´m grateful for

 Dear Olivia,

What I'm grateful for...

I am grateful for my Dad, my family and my family in Dunedin. I am grateful for all nature and flowers. I am grateful for church and a community with lots of people.  I´m also grateful  for my friends at school and church and for my family going to church and Jesus.  I'm  grateful for all the animals and my pets. I'm grateful for technology and how we can communicate with others. I´m thankful for my sisters Tahliah and Claudia who live with me in our house and all the teachers at NBC. Thank you to all the relievers that come, Mrs Daines and Sandy.


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  1. Anonymous18 March 2019 at 10:15

    Hi Olivia this was very well written I love that you have been very descriptive. I really like how wrote about your church that you go to its really nice. Maybe check next time how many spaces you are using over all I love your writing. Did you have fun with your family?

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    1. Anonymous18 March 2019 at 10:41

      Thank you Chelo for telling me what good about it and what I need to work on I really appreciate it. yes i did have fun with my family.
      thanks for a question

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